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Year 2 draft writing

2 March 2022

Here are just a few examples of some draft writing that the children did today. Tomorrow they will turn this into a newspaper report and use their critiques from their friends today to improve their coherence, vocabulary and punctuation.

Front Page News, Mrs Shaw's Class

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